This one's as great as the previous one. I wish you would do a full-fleshed animation though. Rather than creating shorts.
This one's as great as the previous one. I wish you would do a full-fleshed animation though. Rather than creating shorts.
sorry i'll try to make a full length one I just dont have any ideas
Nice frame-by-frame right there. The animation lacks a few inbetweeners in my opinion, but it's acceptable for a first.
The stick figure lacks arms at a few frames. Was that intentional?
The next step for you would be more frames, the environment and perspectives. One of the challenging aspects in animating.
I wish, you best of lucks. You have potential.
Adding in fine details was not something I accomplished on this animation, but I agree it was lacking a few inbetweeners! The Arms, should have been there, but I didn't really look in to that, though I should have :/! Thanks though! for the feedback, and comment :3
An advise to you. You shouldn't submit demos to the portal. They are more likely to receive a blam.
This leaves a weak first impression to me. It's not the lack of sound, but the content itself is barely showing anything. The graphics are untouched, so no comment to that.
PS.: Don't take this statement by heart since it's my thought.
Sprite animation may be losing its charm, but only because it has a bad reputation and this doesn't make it better.
Of all the responses, I would like to praise yours the most (thus far), from what you've said, I totally understand where you're coming from, and I agree with you, there are a lot of sprite animations which are put and including this one which will make people think that there's nothing to it and thus worsening the reputation. this is my first time animating and whilst this is definetly not a cry for sympathy or "don't judge be too harshly" bullcrap, I sincerely hope the finished product will leave people with a better impression.
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Xenolink
I'm impressed. It was very entertaining. The designs are simple, yes. But I think, they worked out well here. There are rooms for improvement.
The quality could be a bit better though. This is already uploaded as a video format. No need to limit yourself if you are sticking to that. The characters had a lot of artifacts in them.
The animation are not bad and the music choice is good. I recommend other SFXs though or at least more variety.
You did great. Best wishes at your series.
Thank you Pkmn2 i appreciate all of the thoughts i am getting from my videos. You people are AWESOME!!! YOU ARE AWESOME PKMN2!! XD
I hate to ask, but does your father like eating flies?
Great animation, btw. I found it funny and disgusting at the same time. Like poop jokes.
Umm no... We were just talking about ideas for animating, an he thought about this funny idea, and wanted to see how i will animate it. That is about it..
This isn't half bad. People can see that you've put effort into it. The animations go out of proportion sometimes though. The voices are pretty audible to me, even though I don't understand it.
You did a really great job.
Can I ask what grade you got for this?
I getted an A+
The reason I give you no stars, is because you didn't make this, unless you can provide proof.
...but. Holy crap, this is one tragic perspective of the game. I really enjoyed it. Using the "Kara no Kyoukai" OST caught me off-guard, so props to that too. The animation is really well-made. The art is nothing phenomenal, but the animation balanced this out.
Overall, absolute great storytelling and great animation.
As u see,my mother tongue is Chinese instead of English,
I worry about the translation ,and happy to see it's fine.(or not?)
In general,how do you judge a flash is made by whom?
Then I could know how to proof.
The action was really well choreographed and the background was really appealing. Did you made them?
I also like the way you animated the movement. It felt really natural and it's as if I were watching a demo of a videogame.
You could have zoomed more into the action, but I know for a fact, that most sprite animations involving fighting-based characters are like that.
Personally any other BGM would be more fitting, but it's just a personal opinion.
Overall, it's really well done. I hope, that you won't have to deal with a similar problem in the future.
Stupid things like that, make my hair go white.
Backgrounds were made by me, yes.
I'm gld you enjoyed it! I hope this corruption crap stops... but then again half of the time it's my own fault so I can't be too mad, right? anyway
Thank you!
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